Fie upon useless words. Fie, I say!
The latest culprit: “Is something that.” Reading these words reminds me of eating a bowl of mushy, gray cereal. No flavor. Precious little purpose when easier-to-take alternatives exist. An editor can and should excise that phrase violently.
“The concert is something that everyone will enjoy.”
Make it: “Everyone will enjoy the concert.”
“The show is something that demonstrates the development of artistic styles.”
Make it: “The show demonstrates the development of artistic styles.”
Next topic.